Poetry Archive: Volume II Issue 9
Since until very recently I’ve had minimal response to my pleas for feedback (though I do thank those of you who have commented so far—the recent response has been quite gratifying) and, more to the point, my archive of poetry I’ve posted here has grown to daunting size, each Thursday I present you with (links to) a smaller selection of my poems. Please read each poem and tell me which poem or poems you liked best (and if possible why, as well as any other comments you may have, such as possible improvements).
Again, please comment and tell me which poem or poems of these you liked best, and if possible why. And any other comments you care to give.