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Elves in the Shine Cycle

Elves may be the second most common race in the Shine Cycle, after human beings. In the world in which the series is primarily set they are no more numerous than dwarves or any of the other major minor races, but they also inhabit a collection of worlds across the galaxy from Earth, which joined politically long ago to form what they call “the Elven Council.” Read more…

Policy Debate: A Critique of the Appeal to Authority

Some time ago I wrote an essay arguing that consistency in debate should be required between as well as within rounds. Today I’d like to tackle the other major problem I see with forensic policy debate: the fallacy of appealing to authority—the idea that a judge should by default believe an orator’s position because he has presented the words of another like-minded author or speaker.

For considering questions of fact, appealing to (true) authority is unavoidable—there are people whose job it is to come up with various statistics, for example, and the ethics of academia require us to cite their work when we use it. And it is not unreasonable to build on the previous work of earlier scholars in answering questions of value and of policy, just as we do in other academic work. However, in practice, debates tend to come down to preponderance or even existence of “evidence”—one side either having far more “cards” behind the crucial points, or having found someone making a point none of their opponents’ cards could answer—instead of using true authorities to bolster truly superior arguments.

This problem can, I think, be addressed by a few teams occasionally using a “critique” (more commonly known, using the German spelling, as a “kritik”) of this fallacy, along the lines I outline below. The kritik is a comparatively recent (the past decade and a half or so …) innovation in debate, an argument that criticizes one’s opponents’ argumentation itself; rather than answering their arguments, it advocates that they be dismissed out of hand without regard to their validity or soundness.

This kritik is “linked” to the opponents’ arguments by the very fact that they cite supposed experts as “evidence” for their arguments in re questions of value or of policy.

We follow this proof of the “link” by arguing by logic from common knowledge, intuition, and first principles that the “appeal to authority” is a logical fallacy—in academia, proof is established only by repeatable experiment and by logic, not by “the preponderance of the evidence”. Debate is not a courtroom.

To demonstrate the problem with this, we enter a thought experiment. We suppose for the sake of argument that the round’s judge is a rational being, within the technical meaning of that term in philosophy, and that the four interlocutors in the debate may be rational beings, but that everyone outside the debate is not only irrational but wrong on any point relevant to the debate, except for questions of fact. This taints any point on which outside “evidence” rather than intuition, general knowledge, or logic from first principles is used as support. And, further, any orator who falls into this fallacy has thereby proven himself to be irrational (again, in the technical meaning of that term in philosophy), and so should not be trusted on any point of value or policy.

Finally, the impact: Since our opponents have proven themselves unreliable by producing invalid arguments in the debate, nothing they say should be trusted in deciding whether or not to endorse the resolution.

I note that this kritik is not necessarily only a negative argument. It would be entirely possible to run a plan and support it with arguments based purely on intuition and logic from first principles, then run this kritik in the second affirmative constructive after the negative response, though this would be rather risky.

If I were faced with this kritik, I would argue that, as in all academia, I was building on others’ work and must cite them. Second, I would make the above point about the necessity of referring to trustworthy experts in answering questions of fact, and the reasonableness of it in answering questions of value and policy. Third, I would assert that I have been careful to only use trustworthy sources in building my case, while this kritik was invented because of the problem of untrustworthy sources being used. And fourth, I would make a counter-kritik based on my earlier essay, arguing that since my opponents relied on the same fallacy in previous debates, they are no more rational than I am, and if my arguments should be dismissed a priori so should theirs—and since their kritik is thus spurious it should cost them the round.

What do you think of these lines of argument? Or do you have a better solution to the problem I’m trying to solve?

“Taliesin’s Last Lament”

January 27, 2012 1 comment

O, beloved: O, best loved Blanchefleur!
Now I lay me down upon the green earth
Of my own land, which I held best of all—
Till now, when ’tis the worst to me, for now
Upon my rising I’ll not see the face
And smile of my beloved Blanchefleur.
Nor shall I till the years have passed us by!
What purpose has the Lord to keep me here,
And she still there, yet separate and distinct
When we feel nearly one—in spirit, soul,
If not yet in our, frailer, mortal flesh?

This is another—internal-chronologically, possibly the last—poem in my series of poems set in the Arthurian legends (see that link for a slightly more detailed explanation). The speaker is in fact relinquishing the name—the identity—of Taliesin, according to the story which shall be told in my planned novel Sunshine Civil War. In order of composition (“Doylist” chronology), this is one of the later poems in the series, but was written several years ago, and I have no way of dating it any more precisely than that.

I always welcome your comments, critique, suggestions, or any other feedback on this poem or any other part of my work. (In other words, if you like it, if you don’t like it, if something “works”, if something “doesn’t work”, if it makes you think of something or someone, etc., please comment and say so!) If you like this, you can follow this blog, which includes one of my poems every Friday; you can also read other poems I’ve written here on my blog (or if that list is too intimidating, I’m posting more manageable subsets each week, such as yesterday’s archive installment, so you can just start with those). I’d particularly like to know which poems you think are my best.

This poem is also mirrored as a Google Doc and on WEbook.

Poetry Archive: Volume II Issue 8

Since until very recently I’ve had minimal response to my pleas for feedback (though I do thank those of you who have commented so far—the recent response has been quite gratifying) and, more to the point, my archive of poetry I’ve posted here has grown to daunting size, each Thursday I present you with (links to) a smaller selection of my poems. Please read each poem and tell me which poem or poems you liked best (and if possible why, as well as any other comments you may have, such as possible improvements).

Again, please comment and tell me which poem or poems of these you liked best, and if possible why. And any other comments you care to give.

Writing status update

It’s been a couple of months since the last update; in that time I’ve accomplished more than in previous months (not that that’s saying much), but most new material ran in this space pretty much immediately. The one bright spot was still more revision (polishing, but also some deeper issues) on An Internal Conflict, including yet another draft of the prologue, with the help of the Writing Circle at the Holy Worlds forum.

One of the main projects I intend to attempt in the near future is a somewhat detailed outline of the story that was originally titled “A Murder, a Mystery, and a Marriage” (which I serialized here two years ago); a cursory look, as the first step in a more thorough revision, revealed that I left all sorts of loose threads, details that get mentioned early on as if important but never used again, and a lot of the important points of the ending aren’t properly foreshadowed.

I also hope to finally finish my projection of our universe’s future history, which has been “blocking” me for a long time, so I can get on to the next (less knotty) items in my task queue.

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Fan Fiction: Five Categories

Following Tolkien, we often refer to the imagined worlds in which works of fiction take place as “secondary worlds”. But in the last half-century or so, many amateur authors have created, and shared widely, works set in what we might call “tertiary worlds”—worlds that are to a “secondary world” as it is to our “primary world.” This is a phenomenon commonly known as “fan fiction”, “fanfic”, or in some circles simply “fic”.

We can divide fan-fiction authors into at least five (significantly overlapping!) groups, based on their reason for writing it. Read more…

“Midnight”

January 20, 2012 2 comments

As midnight passes by without a sound
And stars, I’m sure, wheel past above the clouds,
How long shall I lie, shivering, awake,
With only my regrets for company?
Why can I scarcely find the words to pray?
And when shall rest at last o’ertake my limbs?

I wrote this about two months ago—as winter was beginning in earnest. I intended to write more, to bring it to a conclusion or at least to a more settled feeling, but after some reflection I think it perhaps works as it stands, and so decided to post it today.

As always, I earnestly welcome your comments, suggestions, questions, critique, or other feedback about this or any other part of my work. (In other words, if you liked this poem, or you didn’t like it, or it made you think of something, or … please leave a comment to let me know.) If you liked this, you can also read other poems I’ve written here on my blog (starting with yesterday’s archive installment, since the full archive is by now, at over a hundred poems, somewhat daunting); I’d especially like to know which poems you think are my best.

This poem is also mirrored on WEbook and Google Docs.

Poetry Archive: Volume II Issue 7

Since until very recently I’ve had minimal response to my pleas for feedback (though I do thank those of you who have commented so far—the recent response has been quite gratifying) and, more to the point, my archive of poetry I’ve posted here has grown to daunting size, each Thursday I present you with (links to) a smaller selection of my poems. Please read each poem and tell me which poem or poems you liked best (and if possible why).

Again, please comment and tell me which poem or poems of these you liked best, and if possible why. And any other comments you care to give.

2000-2001 Campaign Log: Part 5

Today I’m continuing the annotated log of the first campaign of Strategic Primer, which I continued last month. Read more…

The Sigyni

January 16, 2012 3 comments

The Sigyni are a race of four-winged intelligent bats in the Shine Cycle that originally inhabited a large, but not very dense, planet in the Despard Cluster (far above the world of the two continents). A Sigyn is about human-sized, between five and eight feet long at adulthood, with each wing between three and five feet long, and covered in light fur all over. They have “hands” (with five fingers plus an opposable thumb on each) at the end of each wing, claws (two sets of six claws, one opposable, each) serving as their “feet”, and two prehensile tails. Read more…

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